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Elementary Level: Writing a Short Paragraph (Focus on Structure)

Mid Level: Narrative Writing (Story Writing Basics)

High Level: Figurative Language (Similes, Metaphors, Personification)

Elementary Level (Kinder to Grade 2)

Subject: Writing a Short Paragraph (Focus on Structure)

Objectives:

Children will write a simple paragraph with a topic sentence and 2-3 supporting details using guided sentence starters.

Alignment with Standards:

  • CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.1.2 – Write informative/explanatory texts with a topic and some facts.
  • CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.1.5 – Focus on a topic, respond to questions, and add details.
  • CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.L.1.1 – Print all upper- and lowercase letters.

Lesson Plan

Materials Needed:

  • Chart paper (pre-written paragraph example)
  • Graphic organizer (hamburger paragraph template)
  • Sentence starter strips (e.g., “My favorite animal is ____ because ____.”)
  • Pencils, crayons, and writing paper
  • Sticker rewards (for participation)

Lesson Activities:

1. Introduction (10 min)

  • Read Aloud: Share a simple paragraph (e.g., “Dogs are great pets. They are friendly. They can play fetch. Dogs love their owners.”).
  • Think-Pair-Share: “What is the main idea? What details tell us more?”

2. Modeling (10 min)

  • Hamburger Paragraph Poster:
    • Top Bun (Topic Sentence): “Cats are fun pets.”
    • Lettuce/Cheese (Details): “They purr when happy. They chase toys.”
    • Bottom Bun (Closing): “I love my cat!”
  • Guided Practice: Complete a paragraph together (e.g., “The park is fun. I can swing. I can slide. I like the park.”).

3. Guided Writing (20 min)

  • Sentence Starters: Students choose a prompt (e.g., “My favorite food is ___ because ___.”) and fill in the hamburger organizer.
  • Scaffolding:
    • Struggling Writers: Provide tracing words or word banks (e.g., “pizza, yummy, cheese”).
    • Advanced Writers: Add a closing sentence (e.g., “That’s why I love pizza!”).

4. Sharing & Feedback (10 min)

  • Students read paragraphs aloud. Praise specific elements: “Great topic sentence! I like your detail about ___!”

5. Extension (Optional)

  • Illustrate the Paragraph: Draw a picture to match the writing.
  • “Paragraph Puzzle”: Cut sentences apart and reassemble in order.

Assessment:


Visual Aids:

1. Hamburger Paragraph Template:

  ___________________________ (Top Bun: Topic Sentence)  
  ___________________________ (Lettuce: Detail #1)  
  ___________________________ (Cheese: Detail #2)  
  ___________________________ (Bottom Bun: Closing)  

2. Sentence Starter Examples:

  • “I like ____ because ____.”
  • “____ is my favorite place. You can ____ and ____.”

Adaptations:

  • Kinesthetic Learners: Act out details (e.g., “Show me how you slide at the park!”).
  • ELL Support: Use pictures with labels (e.g., clipart of foods/animals).

Mid Level (Grade 3 to 5)

Subject: Narrative Writing (Story Writing Basics)

Objective:

Children will craft a complete short story with a clear beginning (introduction), middle (problem/events), and end (resolution) using guided brainstorming and story starters.

Alignment with Standards:

  • CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.3: Write narratives using descriptive details and clear event sequences.
  • CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.4: Produce coherent writing for task and audience.
  • CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.5: Develop writing through planning and revision.

Materials

  • Story starter prompts (printed or digital)
  • Graphic organizers (Story Mountain, BME Chart)
  • Writing journal/paper
  • Colored pencils (for illustrating)
  • Timer (for quick writes)
  • Peer feedback forms (Two Stars and a Wish)

Lesson Sequence

Day 1: Introduction & Brainstorming

Activity 1: Story Analysis (20 min)

  • Read aloud “The Enchanted Umbrella” (a 1-paragraph model story).
  • Discussion:
    • “What hooks you at the beginning?”
    • “How does the character solve the problem?”
    • “What makes the ending satisfying?”

Activity 2: Story Starters (25 min)

  • Students pick 1 prompt (e.g., “The message in the bottle said…”) and brainstorm:
    • Characters: “Who is the hero/villain?”
    • Setting: “Where does the story happen?”
    • Problem: “What goes wrong?”
    • Solution: “How is it fixed?”
  • Visual Aid: Story Mountain Diagram showing plot structure.

Day 2: Drafting

Activity 3: Guided Writing (40 min)

  1. Beginning:
    • Sentence starter: “As [character] [action], suddenly [surprise]…”
    • Example: “As Mia explored the attic, suddenly a dusty book glowed!”
  2. Middle:
    • Conflict prompt: “But then [problem], so [action]…”
    • Example: “But then the book locked itself! So Mia searched for a key.”
  3. End:
    • Resolution frame: “Finally, [character] learned [lesson].”
    • Example: “Finally, Mia opened the book and discovered her grandma’s magic recipes!”

Tip: Encourage dialogue (“Wait!” shouted Mia) and sensory details (“The attic smelled like old peppermints”).


Day 3: Revising & Publishing

Activity 4: Peer Feedback (20 min)

  • Swap stories and use Two Stars and a Wish:
    • Two Stars: “I liked when…”
    • One Wish: “Could you add…?”

Activity 5: Final Draft (30 min)

  • Rewrite neatly and illustrate the climax scene.

Assessment Rubric


Visual Aids

1. Story Starter Prompts

  • “The robot dog barked… but it wasn’t a bark. It was a—”
  • “I planted the seeds at midnight. By morning, they’d grown into…”

2. Graphic Organizer Example

[Beginning]  
Characters: ________  
Setting: ________  
Problem: ________  

[Middle]  
Events: 1. ______ 2. ______  

[End]  
Solution: ________  
Lesson: ________  

Differentiation

  • Struggling Writers: Provide a fill-in-the-blank template.
  • Advanced Writers: Add a subplot or flashback.
  • ELL Support: Use picture aids + word banks.

High Level (Grade 6 to 8)

Subject: Figurative Language (Similes, Metaphors, Personification)

Objective:

Children will identify and apply similes, metaphors, and personification in writing by analyzing texts and rewriting sentences with figurative language.

Alignment with Standards:

  • CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.L.7.5: Interpret figures of speech in context.
  • CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.7.3.D: Use precise words and phrases, relevant descriptive details, and sensory language.
  • CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.7.4: Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative language.

Materials

  • Figurative Language Anchor Chart (Definitions + Examples)
  • Short Passages (From novels, poems, or songs)
  • Task Cards (For practice exercises)
  • Highlighters/Colored Pens (For annotation)
  • Interactive Notebook Templates (For notes)
  • Digital Option: Google Slides or Kahoot! Quiz

Lesson Sequence

Day 1: Introduction & Identification

1. Warm-Up (10 min)

  • Play “Guess the Figurative Language” with famous quotes:
    • “The world is a stage.” (Metaphor)
    • “Her smile was as bright as the sun.” (Simile)
    • “The wind whispered through the trees.” (Personification)

2. Direct Instruction (20 min)

  • Anchor Chart Review:
    • Simile: Comparison using like or as (“Brave as a lion”)
    • Metaphor: Direct comparison (“Time is a thief”)
    • Personification: Giving human traits to non-human things (“The flowers danced in the breeze”)

3. Guided Practice (20 min)

  • Students highlight figurative language in short passages (e.g., Langston Hughes’s poetry or Tuck Everlasting excerpts).

Day 2: Application & Writing

4. Figurative Language Scavenger Hunt (15 min)

  • Find examples in song lyrics (e.g., “Firework” by Katy Perry) or advertisements.

5. Rewriting Activity (25 min)

  • Task Cards: Rewrite literal sentences figuratively.
    • Literal: “The test was hard.”
    • Figurative: “The test was a mountain I couldn’t climb.” (Metaphor)

6. Creative Writing (20 min)

  • Describe a storm using all three devices (simile, metaphor, personification).

Day 3: Review & Assessment

7. Peer Review (15 min)

  • Swap descriptions and identify each other’s figurative language.

8. Quiz (20 min)

  • Matching, Multiple Choice, and Short Answer (Example: “Is ‘The stars winked at me’ a simile, metaphor, or personification?”)

9. Extension (Optional)

  • Figurative Language in Media: Analyze a TV show clip for examples.

Assessment Rubric


Differentiation

  • Struggling Learners: Provide sentence frames (“The wind sounded like ___”).
  • Advanced Learners: Write a micro-story packed with figurative language.
  • ELL Support: Use visual prompts (e.g., angry clouds for personification).

Visual Aids

1. Anchor Chart Example:

SIMILE: "Her laugh was like wind chimes."  
METAPHOR: "His words were daggers."  
PERSONIFICATION: "The alarm clock screamed at me."  

2. Task Card Sample:
“Rewrite this literally: ‘The car engine coughed and died.’”
→ “The car engine made a noise and stopped working.”

3. Image Aid:
[A gloomy house with windows like eyes and a door like a frown.]
Writing Challenge: “Describe this house using personification.”

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